Article:
Arrogant parents and extravagant tantrums: all the world’s a stage in our precious playgrounds
Rhiannon Lucy Cosslett
https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2024/jan/22/parents-tantrums-british-playgrounds-austerity-decline
Arrogant parents and extravagant tantrums: all the world’s a stage in our precious playgrounds
Rhiannon Lucy Cosslett
https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2024/jan/22/parents-tantrums-british-playgrounds-austerity-decline
Initial research and mind mapping:
Initial thumbnails:
More thumbnails:
The ones above were too literal and I quickly moved on to sketching these more conceptual ones based on key words and phrases I picked out of the article.
The ones above were too literal and I quickly moved on to sketching these more conceptual ones based on key words and phrases I picked out of the article.
Development:
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Further development/ restarting:
After feedback sessions with the lecturers I realised the ideas and final illustration I had come to was too much and gave the wrong message to the audience. The guillotine gave the impression that the cut in funds and Play England halving was deliberate like an execution, whereas this is something that has just happened over time. My illustration needs to be simpler, so I am going to look back on my first thumbnails and develop these.
After feedback sessions with the lecturers I realised the ideas and final illustration I had come to was too much and gave the wrong message to the audience. The guillotine gave the impression that the cut in funds and Play England halving was deliberate like an execution, whereas this is something that has just happened over time. My illustration needs to be simpler, so I am going to look back on my first thumbnails and develop these.
Artist research:
Thumbnailing and development:
Final illustration:
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